Very nice, especialy like the detail of the various areas. My only concern is that it can be a bit confusing to the eye on first glance.

Nice work. Did you invent this from whole cloth, or base it on something written? I like the fact that it's radial, like Ondar Shambal (Whitewall). I imagine many First Age cities were this shape.

I tried to follow the books when I could (Scavenger's Sons, mostly). Unlike the Nexus section, however, the Chiaroscuro entry doesn't have much in the way of layout information. It mentions the blue glass walls in the harbor and the blood-red glass roads, some general flavor, etc.

Very nice. Functional. The colors are a a bit jarring though....

Very nice, you did a great job!

great map. I agree with Solfi though, tone down the colour palette

I love this map, Chiaroscuro's my favorite city by far, and I've wanted a good map for it for a long time-thanks for this. My only problem would be the breakwaters-rather than a series of smaller walls, they'd likely be a pair of long walls, one running east-west from the northern promentory, the other running northeast from the southern corner of the bay.

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